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Spider-Man Retold Part3 Ch16 by TheHero-Guy Spider-Man Retold Part3 Ch16 by TheHero-Guy

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The first Spider-Man: Retold story is nearing its end!

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DarkZeWulf Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
well thats pretty good lol
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TheHero-Guy Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks
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DarkZeWulf Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
let me know when you have the whole thing out.
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TheHero-Guy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Will do! Thanks for reading by the way!
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ShadowWolf121212 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Liking the story a bunch so far. But tell me you kill the bumbling web-head at some point. I don't want to have to write it myself, so tell me you did the dirty deed. I'll do it if I must.
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TheHero-Guy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I haven't written the rest yet...but thank you so much for the feedback! I really want to try and take into consideration what the reader's have to say. So let me see if I've got this right: you'd like me to kill Spider-Man off?
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ShadowWolf121212 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Very much so. I think in both movies and comics he's asking for death with how many rouges he's made for himself that hate Spider-Man AND Peter. And his dialogue is still jokes, 24/7. Kill the dumbass.
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TheHero-Guy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, this is just the first story, more of an origin story, but I can definitely see what you mean. If you would like to write how you want the story to end, please feel free to!
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ShadowWolf121212 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Certainly. I'll get to an end as soon as possible, and replace him with another hero. I'll do my reaserch on a replacement first though. Lol.
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TheHero-Guy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome! Yeah, I wanted to establish the character as a quirky teenager, but have him grow into a more mature hero. I'll be looking forward to your story!
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